…There was a strange feeling about
the hotel, Jared thought. The guy at the lobby had been very friendly, and now
it struck him that the other clients he had met seemed a little too happy. He’d noticed, when he entered the room, that
there wasn’t a TV set nor a telephone…he needed one to call his friend to pick
him up the next day, since his car had broken down. Right now, with the sun
gone down, everything was dim, for the lightning was very poor. There was dead
silence everywhere.
He left his room to explore the
place…he could feel it in the air, something foul was about. That was when he
stumbled on something—he looked down. It was a dead goat, its side tattered
with blood, eyes bulging wildly and mouth open revealing teeth, resembling a
demonic grin.
“I killed it right now”, said a
voice. Jared jumped. He hadn’t seen a young man crouching nearby, in the
shadows. “It’s for the Hotel’s proprietor.”
“Huh?” said Jared. “Wha—I don’t get
this. Why in the world would he want that?”
“You don’t realize it, do you?”
said the young man, “you made a great mistake in choosing this place for the
night. We are all prisoners here, ever since the moment we stepped onto the
lobby. We’re doomed to be under the tyranny
of the proprietor…he demands we sacrifice goats and leave them in the corridors
for him to feed on when he walks by at midnight. And, on every new moon, we
have to shed some of our own blood into a flask and leave it in his pent house.
Such is life in this hotel.”
Jared felt chills run down his
spine as he heard these words. “….who IS this proprietor?....What IS he?”
The young man looked at him
steadily. “We once tried face him…put an end to all this and become free, but
there was no way our weapons could wound him….” He paused. “There is only one explanation…he’s
not human.”
The next minute, Jared was running
down the stairs, going to the lobby to run out the door….he halted abruptly.
The door through which he had entered earlier was gone, just a solid wall with
a painting hanging in its place. He looked left and right. The lobby guy was
still there, looking at him with no sign of surprise at all, smiling.
“Trying to get out?” he said, his
eyes widening strangely, “My friend, in this hotel, we gladly accept anybody’s
coming…” the eyes were beginning to bulge, similar to the dead goat’s, and his
smile widened, too, “… But we don’t let anyone leave .”◙
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That's chilly,yo. I imagine a disgusting guy turning into a chupacabra at night under the full moon. Loved the concept of creepy hotel :P
ReplyDeleteAh pues bien, the chupacabra thing never occurred to me as I wrote it, curiously!
DeleteBTW, people, you should really check this song out if you've never heard it
Deletehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=106AbaxUICY